This category is divided into four sub types
Type 1: Discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
Type 2: Advantages outweigh disadvantages
Type 3: Disadvantages outweigh advantages
Type 4: Discuss both advantages and disadvantages and give your
own opinion.
Type 1: Discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
Structure of the essay:
INTRODUCTION
#Paraphrase the question
#Outline statement
BODY PARAGRAPH 1( Advantages)
#Topic sentence
# Explain how
this is an advantage( supporting details)
# Relevant
example
BODY PARAGRAPH 2 ( Disadvantages)
# Topic sentence
# Explain how
this is a disadvantage
# Example
Conclusion : Summary of the main points
Sample question:
Pressure on the school and university students is increasing
and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon for the students.
ANSWER
It is irrefutable that the burden on school and university
pupils is burgeoning and they have to put more efforts towards their study at a
young age. This essay will suggest that students can make their career bright
with hard work as biggest advantage and students can be the victim of stress
because of more pressure as a primary disadvantage, followed by a reasoned
conclusion.
Today we belong to highly competitive era in which students
need to get good scores to grab job opportunities or enrolling into
universities. So for that purposes students are encouraged to do more hard work
which inculcates the habit of hard working from earlier years into the young
generation and they are better placed in life later on. If they work hard in
early years they will build up a sound career and will have a happy and
contended life. The TIMES recently published a survey report,70% students who works hard in their academics at
a young age are more successful in their fields of working.
Despite this advantage it has also a disadvantage, because
it leads to stress and strain and anxiety. Sometimes students cannot strike a
balance between work and leisure which may results in boredom. Moreover, if
students face failures or can’t cope with the pressures they can have suicidal
tendencies. Always hitting the books keeps the students away from practical and
social life. THE HINDU NEWSPAPER reported that in INDIA 10% of the young
students and university students are suffering from depression because of their
study curriculum burden.
In conclusion, focusing on study more is beneficial for
making the future for the students and they can support their families, however
giving more pressure of study than
capability and age can lead to dire consequences on health and become the cause
of mental illness. So, there is need to make the balance between study and
leisure activities for the students.
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